TFTU: Lilith version 1.0.0

[jack1974]

You can grab the game from here: https://winter-wolves.itch.io/tales-fro ... alm-lilith

It's a plain VN but with several branching points. I plan to upload a full guide on Steam once the game goes live there!

What's New in 1.0.0

- added all the missing artwork so now the game is complete! Calling this version 1.0.0 (official release)
- fixed a line in Evelyn which was referring to a wrong outfit
- added the "alone" thumbnail in gallery
- added KS credits in credits


What's New in 0.7.4

- fixed some confusing hint messages appearing during the story which had outdated information about endings/routes
- added option to skip the round of question with Ophelia on the boat
- added more details to one of Odette's flashback to justify the blood in her clothes
- fixed several typos

What's New in 0.7.3
- fixed several wrong gallery replay scenes
- always with you achievement now unlocks correctly
- now Odette puts her clothes back after the threesome (naughty girl!)
- during the moonlight sex scene, a couple of Ophelia's lines were mistakenly given to Odette, fixed it

What's New in 0.7.2

- made the beta public!
- added an explanation if you don't accept Ophelia's offer to justify Lilith being together with her
- after a flashback scene Lilith was wearing her casual outfit and not the pirate one, fixed
- updated to latest Ren'Py version

[Franka]

I played through the different triad endings. I like it, it's a pretty good story.

Always with you achievement didn't unlock though.

Also, Odette never put her clothes back on after the threesome.

There are more bugs/errors I caught, but more on that tomorrow.

[jack1974]

Thanks, still recovering from eye surgery so will be much slower to reply/update than usual but keep the bug reports coming, I'll fix them later

[Franka]

Some observations:

Spoiler:

If that's middle aged, I'd hate to see what old looks like.


I don't see a beard. I see tattoos though...


Always? We met, like, 6 hours ago or something...


I don't see scars or tattoos.


Shouldn't there be an option to move on without clicking all the dialogue here?


Since we later learn Odette snaps her neck, why is she covered in blood?


This is the first time they're separated in my playthrough though.


I'm a little confused by Lilith's physiology here. Didn't she say her blood was cold? How is her blood cold and her skin warm? Or should I just accept "it's fantasy"?


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Ok, back to reading a few more routes.

[Franka]

I unlocked all the achievements, with 89% script seen. That's probably enough for now. I'll upload the typos/etc. I found later; there weren't that many of them.

[jack1974]

Thanks for the errors. About the cold blood... true. Need to think about it. Maybe "it's fantasy!" could be a good escape from this situation
The other issues came up because I wrote the story before receiving the artwork, so there are a few minor inconsistencies like the one you pointed out. I'll make sure to fix them!

[Franka]

Probably just delete the cold blood part, because Lilith's body temperature is brought up many times throughout the game. If she was cold blooded, she'd just have the same temperature as her surroundings (plus some heat generated by muscle movement).

[jack1974]

OK sounds good, btw about

Spoiler:

Odette's blood in the flashback scene, it's from killing Gaston before she kills Lara afterwards. But I forgot to describe the fact that when she kills him things gets a bit more messy. Anyway will edit the story to justify better that

[Franka]

Typos, etc.

Spoiler:

All I ask for


an unmatched


witness to


techniques


collar on

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[Franka]

Spoiler:

What does "a God with preferences" mean? Honestly, I don't understand that statement.


did it with


thought it was


"Lilith" isn't capitalized.


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