typos thread

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Thanks, will change it into "can gain respect" :)
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The Beginning:
Spoiler:
Karen: "Most of these reports came from people who were understandably traumatized by the experienced." <- should be "experience"

First time in the Unforgiving Swamp:
Spoiler:
As I enter the foggy mist surrounding the swamp, I breathe in...

I'd hate to think I came all the way out here just for a bag of rocks.

Sending Enok to scout an escape route:
Enok nods. He turns to Sylrissa and whispers something in her ear
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Spoiler:
During Galan/Dasyra recruitment scene:

1. Galan: I've been going well so far, and I thing I have it in me to finish this job. -->think

2> Galan shorts, and I hear what sounds like a chuckle -->snorts?
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Thanks, I won't be replying to every post here but I read them all and fix the texts :)
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Tomb of Urd quest
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Error:
King Nimaeus: Well, you'll be familiar with my name soon enough. Tell me... who sent you? Are you disciples of Urd? Has she been too cowardly to do the job himself?

Suggestion:
replace "himself" with "herself" since following text reveals Urd as a woman.
conversation with Kusho
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Error: The forest tells me lots of things. Sometimes it tells me a large predatory has arrived. Other times, the forest is just telling me what is happening today.

Correction: predator
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