1) Vaeril's quest. First meeting with Jaya.
Protecting this wood was my duty. Alas, the woods have fallen into decay, and I have withered along with them.
This has to be said by Jaya and
green. But now it seems as MC's thoughts.
2) "Boots" dialog with Leena. MC says:
Well, I mean, don't you have people who take care of those kinds of trivial things for me?
It has to be
"you". MC talks about Leena.
3) Second (if I remember right) dialog with Nuala about Rue. MC says:
What did it awaken i you?
Do you also see the problem
in this phrase?
4) Dialog with Jasper about being a pirate. MC says:
Hiding in plain sight, huh? That's always seemed a bit risky to me, byt I guess I can see it being beneficial in yor case. Anway, back to our discussion about being a pirate. There have to be other disadvantages, right?
Sometimes people just hate certain letters...
5) Dialog with Geraldine. MC says:
I'm preparing to fight a war. It behooves me to consider how veteran officers might feel about the matter. I'd rather have them as friends than allies.
Err... this has some tactical logic but may be it is better to avoid being
"foes/enemies"?

(if it is not some kind of idiom which even Google cannot help me to find

)
6) Romantic dialog with Sylrissa. She says:
That's a bid sad, isn't it? All those people and none of them have the time to just stop and enjoy the world the live in. I feel lucky compared to them because here I've got all the time in the world.
"Bit"
7) Same dialog. MC's thoughts:
In this silence, the sound of running water and birds fluttering from tree to tree nearby becomes more prounounced. We're only there for a few minutes it feels like a pleasant eternity.
Sometimes people just like certain letters to much...

Moment of, err, "very close interaction" with Nuala

. She says:
Do you know what I like about combat? The best part of fighting is the pain. That sensation that reminds you take that remind you that you're still alive.
Step one:
Step two:
Step three:
I am sorry, but... THIS WAS A SEX SCENE!!! HOW COULD IT HAPPEN IN THE SEX SCENE?!

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9) Next Sylrissa's dialog after, hm, again, "very close interaction" in the pond. Enok says about MC:
Have you told him?
My female elf was gravely offended
10) Same dialog as "very close interaction" with Leena. Leena says:
That's the strangest thing. With you, it's never just one or the other. There are a lot of times when talking to you makes makes my heart beat slower. Like I'm relaxing, and letting my guard down. But there are other times when the opposite happens.
It's never enough "makes" to make heart beats slower...
Additionaly, is comma after "I'm relaxing" necessary? I'm not sure
11) Epilogue with romanced Sylrissa:
My time together Sylrissa has been great. We've traveled Aravorn, stopping a few days in each city. We've been to Shacklesplit, Dingirra, Flowervale. And now we're on a boat heading back to Grimoire
Sometimes people just hate word
"with"...