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typos thread

Post by jack1974 » Sun Feb 04, 2018 3:40 pm

I thougt to make this thread, since I prefer to get the typos separated from the normal bugs (it's not a big problem but if I see posts here I know it's less urgent than game breaking bugs :)).
So if you have noticed typos/grammar stuff in game and want to let me know, use this thread. Thanks :)

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Re: typos thread

Post by Akar Dorn » Thu Feb 08, 2018 4:45 pm

Typogun is loaded. FIRE :twisted:
Spoiler:
1) During Kusho/Vaeril recruitment (I don’t remember which scene it is exactly :oops: ), Kusho says:
What his name?
“What’s”.

2) “Party meeting” scene:
I step step into the midst of the group, and they form a circle around me.
Not enough step step step step step between “step” and “step” :lol:

3) Inside N’Mar:
I feel a gust of wind, and suddenly, the crows begin cawing. The begin flying in front of us, forming a wall of black feathers, as if trying to block our way forward —and the just as quickly, they disperse, leaving a lone figure in their wake. It’s Zephyr.
“They”

4) Same scene as previous. Zephyr says:
I’m going to cut you to shreds and feet your flesh to the crows. The birds usually prefer carrion, but they’ve been known to feast on the flesh of the living if they get a whiff of blood in the air. I guess that’s why crows and I get along so well. That bloodlust is in our nature.
"Feed".

5) Saving Enok after 1st full moon. Sylrissa says:
The good news that encampment it’s quite far from the others. That should give us some time before reinforcements are able to arrive if things go terribly wrong for us.
“Is”

6) Nuala about Rue:
I’m tracking her migration patterns. Rue has been known to change things up from season to season, so I need to keep an eye on her. Based on the location he’s moving, and considering I’ve seen of other rhinos, it seems like she’s headed to the breeding ground.
Transgendered rhinos. I know your games are all LGBT-friendly but this… :wink:

7) If you taking Enok to the Tomb of Urd, MC says:
Your skin? that’s what you’re worrying about?
Capital Letter, Please :mrgreen:

8) Apolimesho while giving tasks to eliminate goblins and dark elves:
The elder druids are only dangerous to that extent that they’re able to convince their people to go to war with us. If we help the elves to defeat the dark elves bandits, then it would be hard for the elder druids to convince the elf population that attacking us when are weak is a good thing.
Missed “we”.

9) Vaeril if player recruited him before the first moon:
It would seem that Vaeril and I share the goal, then. If he’s willing to trust me, them I’m willing to trust him. Besides, if he truly wants me dead, he’d probably catch wind of my location sooner or later.
Schizophrenia, call the ambulance.

10) Name box is missing when MC and Sylrissa discuss naga’s… tastes. Has to be said by MC:
Is it exclusively for nagas? Could a/an [MC’s race] joining in?
11) Vaeril about sick boy:
For this boy, the simple act of taking a breath is an ordeal. Every morning and every night, I give him a bit of vim and vigor, drained from the planets near here. It keeps him alive. But this boy will never breathe normally unless I find some way to mend his throat.
He drains entire planets... :shock:
OH MY IMMORTAL GOD-EMPEROR OF MANKIND! CALL THE SPACE MARINES! WE DISCOVERED NEW TYRANID HIVE FLEET VAERIL! :mrgreen: (N.B Tyranids are the race of planet-eating aliens from Warhammer 40000 setting)

12) Same dialog. Vaeril again:
Ordinarily, I would say no. This is an affliction this boy has suffered since birth. As I said, I can fix wounds, but there is a problem with this his body’s constitution. I can’t give him what was never there, or so conventional thinking suggests.
“This” shouldn’t be here.

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Re: typos thread

Post by jack1974 » Thu Feb 08, 2018 5:33 pm

Thanks a lot, and even if I don't reply to all the comments, some are very hilarious :lol:

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Re: typos thread

Post by Akar Dorn » Thu Feb 08, 2018 7:12 pm

jack1974 wrote:
Thu Feb 08, 2018 5:33 pm
Thanks a lot, and even if I don't reply to all the comments, some are very hilarious :lol:
This is part of my charm 8) :lol:

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Re: typos thread

Post by myoksy » Sat Feb 10, 2018 7:02 pm

Meeting Myrth with Kusho
First, she's the only Elder Druid with that look. Second, his brother Rei is very jealous.
*His* brother? That's a damn fast sex reassignment therapy.

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