Re: Heirs & Graces 0.8.1 beta
Posted: Tue May 10, 2016 10:40 pm
by Foelhe
I'm about halfway through the game on my typo hunt right now. I'll pick up the rest later, but here's what I've got so far.
Simon might have caught some of these already, just trying to be thorough. Might be awhile before I can do the second half.
Spoiler:
Prologue:
“First, never begin a conversation with any lords or ladies that may come to visit. Only speak with them when spoken too and be sure to give them your full attention.”
too => to
“That’s alright. It’s all pretty straight forward. There shouldn’t be any problems.”
straight forward => straightforward
Kamal 1
“Vincent sends you?”
sends => send
Kamal 2
“Even if we’re dressing it up a bit by adding flowers, I would like to keep that aspect of it in tact if I can.”
in tact => intact
Eloy 2
“Sure, he leaves me alone every once and awhile when something else comes up, but more often than not he’s tailing me like a baby duck – except he’s not cute so it’s annoying rather than endearing.”
once and awhile => once in awhile
Scene 4
“I’m supposed to be making sure they’re all still in alphabetical order, but I find my self occasionally pulling out the ones with particularly interesting titles and flipping through them before returning them to their proper places.”
my self => myself
they’re => [This is the first line of the scene, so you might want to change “they’re” to “the books are” or something like that.]
Scene 4
“I am still allowed to complain every once and awhile, aren’t I?”
once and awhile => once in awhile
Kamal 3
“If he was a real body guard he’d have been able to dodge us on his own and you wouldn’t have all those scars.”
body guard => bodyguard
Kamal 3
“I’m liking these kids less and less. How dare she call into question my imaginary body guard skills.”
body guard => bodyguard
Kamal 3
“Kamal points to one of the scars on his arm – the afore mentioned autograph.”
afore mentioned => aforementioned
Vincent 3
“A purchase like this every once and awhile won’t set me back too much.”
Kamal 4
“So I guess what I’m saying is you shouldn’t rely soley on your skills as a warrior.”
soley => solely
Kamal 4
“It might might not sound like a big deal, but it’ll improve your reaction time.”
might might => might
Kamal 4
“Making use of your enviornment can give you an advantage when you might not otherwise have one.”
enviornment => environment
Kamal 4
“It’s generally adviseable to keep your face expressionless to make it hard to read.”
adviseable => advisable
Eloy 4
“From his description I mainly get a sense of lonliness.”
lonliness => loneliness
Kamal 5
“A little to well, actually.”
to => too
Kamal 5
“I’m getting away with something that I really should have recieved some kind of punishment for by now.”
recieved => received
Vincent 5
“It’s okay to be spoiled once and awhile, you know?”
“First, never begin a conversation with any lords or ladies that may come to visit. Only speak with them when spoken too and be sure to give them your full attention.”
too => to
“That’s alright. It’s all pretty straight forward. There shouldn’t be any problems.”
straight forward => straightforward
Kamal 1
“Vincent sends you?”
sends => send
Kamal 2
“Even if we’re dressing it up a bit by adding flowers, I would like to keep that aspect of it in tact if I can.”
in tact => intact
Eloy 2
“Sure, he leaves me alone every once and awhile when something else comes up, but more often than not he’s tailing me like a baby duck – except he’s not cute so it’s annoying rather than endearing.”
once and awhile => once in awhile
Scene 4
“I’m supposed to be making sure they’re all still in alphabetical order, but I find my self occasionally pulling out the ones with particularly interesting titles and flipping through them before returning them to their proper places.”
my self => myself
they’re => [This is the first line of the scene, so you might want to change “they’re” to “the books are” or something like that.]
Scene 4
“I am still allowed to complain every once and awhile, aren’t I?”
once and awhile => once in awhile
Kamal 3
“If he was a real body guard he’d have been able to dodge us on his own and you wouldn’t have all those scars.”
body guard => bodyguard
Kamal 3
“I’m liking these kids less and less. How dare she call into question my imaginary body guard skills.”
body guard => bodyguard
Kamal 3
“Kamal points to one of the scars on his arm – the afore mentioned autograph.”
afore mentioned => aforementioned
Vincent 3
“A purchase like this every once and awhile won’t set me back too much.”
Kamal 4
“So I guess what I’m saying is you shouldn’t rely soley on your skills as a warrior.”
soley => solely
Kamal 4
“It might might not sound like a big deal, but it’ll improve your reaction time.”
might might => might
Kamal 4
“Making use of your enviornment can give you an advantage when you might not otherwise have one.”
enviornment => environment
Kamal 4
“It’s generally adviseable to keep your face expressionless to make it hard to read.”
adviseable => advisable
Eloy 4
“From his description I mainly get a sense of lonliness.”
lonliness => loneliness
Kamal 5
“A little to well, actually.”
to => too
Kamal 5
“I’m getting away with something that I really should have recieved some kind of punishment for by now.”
recieved => received
Vincent 5
“It’s okay to be spoiled once and awhile, you know?”