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Ted x Nicole Fanfiction
Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2014 9:00 am
by sun-glimmer
Hi. I decided to write Ted x Nicole fanfiction. Want to read and leave a review? It's been a while since I last wrote anything, but I hope fans will like it. 
You can read it here:
http://sun-glimmer.tumblr.com/post/8349 ... fanfiction
Or here:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10290013/1 ... -s-Brigade
Re: Ted x Nicole Fanfiction
Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2014 3:32 pm
by fleetp
I don't ordinarily read fan fiction (walls of text), but I quickly read yours. You might wish to consider making a fan made visual novel.
Re: Ted x Nicole Fanfiction
Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2014 3:58 am
by sun-glimmer
Really? Wow, thanks for the idea. Maybe I should try doing that
Re: Ted x Nicole Fanfiction
Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2014 4:08 pm
by fleetp
Oops, you asked for a review, and I failed to provide any comments.
Your grammar, spelling and punctuation are good. I didn't see any typos.
While I have not played the Nicole VN, your story was interesting enough to keep me reading.
Best regards,
fleetp
Re: Ted x Nicole Fanfiction
Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2014 12:39 pm
by sun-glimmer
Wow, thanks fleetp! :D I really appreciate it. Now I feel very motivated to write ;p
Re: Ted x Nicole Fanfiction
Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2014 9:43 am
by sun-glimmer