Ted x Nicole Fanfiction

[sun-glimmer]

Hi. I decided to write Ted x Nicole fanfiction. Want to read and leave a review? It's been a while since I last wrote anything, but I hope fans will like it.

You can read it here:
http://sun-glimmer.tumblr.com/post/8349 ... fanfiction
Or here:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10290013/1 ... -s-Brigade

[fleetp]

I don't ordinarily read fan fiction (walls of text), but I quickly read yours. You might wish to consider making a fan made visual novel.

[sun-glimmer]

Really? Wow, thanks for the idea. Maybe I should try doing that

[fleetp]

Oops, you asked for a review, and I failed to provide any comments.

Your grammar, spelling and punctuation are good. I didn't see any typos.

While I have not played the Nicole VN, your story was interesting enough to keep me reading.

Best regards,
fleetp

[sun-glimmer]

Wow, thanks fleetp! :D I really appreciate it. Now I feel very motivated to write ;p

[sun-glimmer]

Hi. I decided to write Ted x Nicole fanfiction. Want to read and leave a review? It's been a while since I last wrote anything, but I hope fans will like it.

You can read it here:
http://sun-glimmer.tumblr.com/post/8349 ... fanfiction
Or here:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10290013/1 ... -s-Brigade

Chapter two is now up:
http://sun-glimmer.tumblr.com/post/8389 ... hapter-two
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10290013/2 ... -s-Brigade