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Fight at Store:
When he sees that I show no signs of getting out of the way, Ted clicks his tongue and creaks his neck from side to side.
Cracks perhaps. Seems more menacing/irritated than creaks.
Disagree with Jeff about teaming up on Ted:
I keep my hands to me and shake my head.
I keep my hands to myself and shake my head.
At Ted's place:
I regret blurting those words as soon as I do. My eyes widen in fear, and Ted lowers his mug so he can stare directly at me. Coffee still in hand?
... Ted stands to his feet so fast that I'm surprised he didn't spill his drink. Coffee still in hand?
... He lets out a long breath and runs both of his hands up through his hair. Coffee everywhere?
... Ted places his mug next to mine and leans forward to get a better look.
Store Block Party Disaster (No meat):
I mean, he hasn't yelled at me for kissing him on the cheek the other night, so I figure that's gotta to mean something.
No need for to.
The door suddenly opens a crack, and my pink cardigan flies out through it onto the floor.
Nicole changes clothes but she's not wearing pink. Was this one of the scenes where the art was already done?
After Nicole leaves the Store, the player has the option to go back and work that Afternoon. Should we really have that option after what happened?
When he sees that I show no signs of getting out of the way, Ted clicks his tongue and creaks his neck from side to side.
Cracks perhaps. Seems more menacing/irritated than creaks.
Disagree with Jeff about teaming up on Ted:
I keep my hands to me and shake my head.
I keep my hands to myself and shake my head.
At Ted's place:
I regret blurting those words as soon as I do. My eyes widen in fear, and Ted lowers his mug so he can stare directly at me. Coffee still in hand?
... Ted stands to his feet so fast that I'm surprised he didn't spill his drink. Coffee still in hand?
... He lets out a long breath and runs both of his hands up through his hair. Coffee everywhere?
... Ted places his mug next to mine and leans forward to get a better look.
Store Block Party Disaster (No meat):
I mean, he hasn't yelled at me for kissing him on the cheek the other night, so I figure that's gotta to mean something.
No need for to.
The door suddenly opens a crack, and my pink cardigan flies out through it onto the floor.
Nicole changes clothes but she's not wearing pink. Was this one of the scenes where the art was already done?
After Nicole leaves the Store, the player has the option to go back and work that Afternoon. Should we really have that option after what happened?
Example:
Spoiler:
Nicole stays in her Clerk uniform after the Fight at the Store until she goes to Ted's place.
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On the day that Nicole finds her phone, her class is pushed back to the Afternoon when classes have always been in the Morning. It kind of threw me off; I had to go back and double-check that I was still on the same day because I thought for a moment that I had been fast forward to the next day. Anyway, I know Nicole is trying to be brave but would she really go to class and do another action after throwing up and hiding under her covers? She states that she needs to learn more about the abductions. Is it possible for her to spend the rest of the day researching online or something in her dorm? It's just a thought though it might be impossible to switch up something like that at this point. It was just rather jarring (at least for me).