Planet Stronghold 2 release!

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Re: Planet Stronghold 2 release!

Post by myoksy » Mon Apr 06, 2020 8:09 am

~ jacob.rpy:683 "conserving our enviornment and actually"

enviornment? ; )

same file, line ~713 "this topic, He gets" - either end the sentence after topic or use a lower case "he", I think.


michelle.rpy:1080 "starting at my... my boobs"

should be staring

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Re: Planet Stronghold 2 release!

Post by jack1974 » Mon Apr 06, 2020 8:45 am

Thanks

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Re: Planet Stronghold 2 release!

Post by myoksy » Mon Apr 06, 2020 9:01 am

lakadema:101 "You're omniscent"

I don't need to be omniscient to know the correct spelling : P

lakadema:131 "sleep.I"

With all the social distancing I demand more space.

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Re: Planet Stronghold 2 release!

Post by myoksy » Mon Apr 06, 2020 8:09 pm

sometimes waiting a day does not heal the party, e.g. at day 34 when Shiler announces that the team needs to fight yet another round of empire troops before getting food and water.

is this intended? I think it's confusing and believe it would be more logical if sleeping heals the chars even when the new day starts with a special event.

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Re: Planet Stronghold 2 release!

Post by jack1974 » Mon Apr 06, 2020 9:20 pm

So far hasn't been a problem, but I might change it if needed. I wanted to leave some surprises since otherwise the game might have been too easy. Anyway as said I could change it if more people complain or just point it out :)

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Re: Planet Stronghold 2 release!

Post by myoksy » Tue Apr 07, 2020 10:40 am

not a problem per se, but it interrupts my flow: I only notice it in the pre-battle screen and have to reload to visit the hospital thingy. though this is caused by my negligence and not your game : )

To make this comment a little bit more useful, I found a few more texts in need of a blank.

tom "Exactly.That's why"
lakadema "night's sleep.I haven't been"

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Re: Planet Stronghold 2 release!

Post by jack1974 » Tue Apr 07, 2020 11:53 am

Thanks, as usual I won't reply for each typo but I check them all :)

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Re: Planet Stronghold 2 release!

Post by myoksy » Tue Apr 07, 2020 1:58 pm

and still you answered : D

skill description of mushrooms "Speed,Evasion" Moar space!

"Anti-king" in cliff.rpy sounds weird, imho. Why not use "a lot of antiroyal sentiment"?

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Re: Planet Stronghold 2 release!

Post by jack1974 » Tue Apr 07, 2020 2:17 pm

Yes I agree that sounds better, even if I wrote that because people can't stand Oscar (the king) but not the Queen. Anyway yes, anti-king seems strange to read :)

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Re: Planet Stronghold 2 release!

Post by myoksy » Tue Apr 07, 2020 9:28 pm

michelle.rpy: "Michelle treatened to commit suicide"
-> threatened

chp3.rpy: "Thank you for you help"
-> your help

chp4.rpy: "Their hallucinogen effects are increased that way."
-> hallucinogenic effects

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