dev thread

[jack1974]

I'll just post some random stuff as the development goes on. Like today I've been reading a lot of second chapter texts and wanted to share with you the following lines:

in brown the writer's comments

[ValHallen]

Shouldn't it be "weak to kisses"?

[jack1974]

Yes obviously, but it's just a first draft, as you can see by the comments

[Franka]

Epic demons are purple, right?

[Ryocchi]

LOL It should be so much fun, reading the first drat and then watch it take form and refining itself with every correction.

[jack1974]

the beginning of chapter 3 of Loren 2! As you can see, the writer really knows what makes a topselling game!

[P_Tigras]

Darth Vader in a bikini is a scary thought, especially old Anakin from Return of the Jedi...

Now Loren can fight in a bikini all she wants. It's even practical since body armor doesn't stop light sabers and would just slow her down.

[jack1974]

Darth Vader in a bikini is a scary thought, especially old Anakin from Return of the Jedi...

See, that's why is a formidable opponent. People run away screaming in horror at the sight

Now Loren can fight in a bikini all she wants. It's even practical since body armor doesn't stop light sabers and would just slow her down.

On this I think we all agree!