Queen Of Thieves beta 1.0.3 (new achievements)

A fantasy otome RPG about three young thieves with special skills https://www.winterwolves.com/queenofthieves.htm
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Queen Of Thieves beta 1.0.3 (new achievements)

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http://www.macgames.biz/games/QoT-1.0.3-all.zip

Made this beta version since I added 6 new achievements and updated Ren'Py library. The email registration won't work anymore (older games will still work, but when I update them, the only system will be the serial key).

What's New in 1.0.3
- added a messagebox in robberies showing up once to inform about the other targets
- added replay of the "Arianna defends Raul" CG clicking on the "best MILF of Aravorn" achievement :lol:
- various minor typos fixed

What's New in 1.0.2
- added 6 more achievements in preparation of Steam release
- used latest version of Ren'Py with webp support, to reduce download size
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Will the steam release come out before 2016 ends?
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No sorry, since now there's the various sales and it's bad to release it, plus a new version of Ren'Py has just been released so I want to use it (and I need to do a bit more testing). But it will be either end of January or February 2017 for sure!
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jack1974 wrote:No sorry, since now there's the various sales and it's bad to release it, plus a new version of Ren'Py has just been released so I want to use it (and I need to do a bit more testing). But it will be either end of January or February 2017 for sure!
Glad to know,I was afraid it would not come to steam.I'll just wait a little bit
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Re: Queen Of Thieves beta 1.0.2 (new achievements)

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mainStory.rpy 132:

His older daughter Joanne appeared. <- should probably be "eldest daughter" since there are three and you use youngest for Thalia.

Nitpicking, but when it says "Party got a new item!" I think it'd make more sense to say "The party got a new item!" because it just reads weird otherwise.
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Thanks :)
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Store and items selected (the help text): headquarters

Also, the description of burning is confusing. I'm not sure if the burning person takes damage when attacking or if people attacking the burning person take damage.

Stolen Gold help text: "This value indicates how many gold coins you have stolen, and how much gold is left. (technically "there's" is also okay but "is" is simpler)

rooms.rpy 595:
It looks like there'll be less...

tiberius.rpy 46:
...supplies over the next few days.

tiberius.rpy 124:
Now off to bed with(?) the three of you. (missing a word?)

tiberius.rpy 134:
...the only explanation (no s)

Other Shops (tutorial text)
Of course, yours is not the only

maryAnn.rpy 235:
seen -> saw

Tharjalla's shop text:
All kinds of potions are available here!
Under the green background description I think it should say "it's" instead of "is". Can't get an exact quote because I don't know how to bring it up again.
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Troyen wrote: Also, the description of burning is confusing. I'm not sure if the burning person takes damage when attacking or if people attacking the burning person take damage.
The second, people attacking a burning target will get damaged :)
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Ah. The burning debuff description explained that fairly well. Just the help text on the skill select screen was ambiguous.

fredrick.rpy 1549:
...sometime. (no s at the end)

Honor points and item sets (tutorial text):
...catacomb levels of monsters...
The items will remain in your possession...

Honor Gained (Help Text):
between parenthesis

encounters.rpy 983:
worth -> worthy
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Re: Queen Of Thieves beta 1.0.2 (new achievements)

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Thanks, I'll keep looking this thread for your typos report even if I don't always reply :)
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