So these were the my opinions. I am not aiming step anyones toes here, but if someone has more insight on the matter, I'd like to learn more.
No worries Grodul. Get/Go are fine in retrospect. I needed to I step away from the screen yesterday for that reason, seeing a problem that wasn't there. Staring at the text for too long can do that
Regarding the fixes, I think will just fix TYPOS or big grammar mistakes, but not go too much in detail about what version is better
Nope, no one is asking you to judge
The main intent is to just fix Typos or Big Grammar Mistakes.
Absolutely. It is in our best interest not have him against us. We can deal with him after we've attended to more urgent matters.
Put a 'to' before 'have', and make 'interest' a plural:
Absolutely. It is in our best interests not to have him against us. We can deal with him after we've attended to more urgent matters.
Wow. Sounds something incredibly powerful!
The 'something' makes the sentence a bit confusing. Were you going for: Wow. Something sounds incredibly powerful!
Or, the 'something' can be removed, and make the sentence stronger:
Wow. Sounds incredibly powerful!
Yes, that's why is extremely well defended. It is in a sort of robot facility. The central computer AI took over the place and now is guarding the item as a relic.
I'd add an 'it' after 'why' to get: Yes, that's why it is extremely well defended.