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jack1974 Sep 18, 2015
Joanne's intro:

http://www.winterwolves.net/blog/2015/09/the-queen-of-thieves-joanne/
jack1974 Sep 25, 2015
Kira's intro:

http://www.winterwolves.net/blog/2015/09/the-queen-of-thieves-kira/
yayswords Sep 25, 2015
I have a feeling those two weren't written on the same day.
jack1974 Sep 25, 2015
Why ?
Thee Forsaken One Sep 25, 2015
I have a feeling those two weren't written on the same day.


I wrote all of them on the same day.
yayswords Sep 25, 2015
Trap sprung - post the last one then. ;)



No but seriously, Kira's intro has words and expressions I had to look up. Joanne's didn't, and I don't think anything I've read in Loren or SotW has had them either. So it stood out.



Oh also, last paragraph, first sentence: his -> has. And while we're at it, perhaps little -> few?
Thee Forsaken One Sep 25, 2015
No but seriously, Kira's intro has words and expressions I had to look up. Joanne's didn't, and I don't think anything I've read in Loren or SotW has had them either. So it stood out.


I could but then jack would have nothing to post in his blogs for the next couple of months. :P



Apart from a couple of typos (which irk me now that I see them) what in particular did you find unusual?
yayswords Sep 25, 2015
Illicit liaisons I could guess at because of the context, but I googled it to be sure. Foibles I had to outright look up, at first I even thought that sentence (because of that and the typo) was an experiment to see if you could let Jack write one line without us noticing lol. Woe betide was the third one but I suppose it's not that tricky.
jack1974 Sep 25, 2015
Haha yes, I can't post the last one now. I also have a few more characters beside Thalia, secondary ones, so yes those I can probably group in a single post :)
Thee Forsaken One Sep 25, 2015
Illicit liaisons I could guess at because of the context, but I googled it to be sure. Foibles I had to outright look up, at first I even thought that sentence (because of that and the typo) was an experiment to see if you could let Jack write one line without us noticing lol. Woe betide was the third one but I suppose it's not that tricky.


Oh okay. Honestly, I wasn't trying to write it in a way to cause confusion. I just write that way naturally. ^^;
kadakithis Sep 25, 2015
Man these characters seem actually pretty complex. I love Kira and feel sorry for her, and Joanne as well. I love that they have issues that build off of their already complex personalities. The fact they love each other on top of all that is heart warming. Really love the balance between drama and feel goods.



I looked forward to this game anyway but now even more so, really great job!
jack1974 Sep 25, 2015
Cool :) Yes I'm pretty happy with Forsaken work so far, that I even asked her to rewrite a good amount of the otome path to bring it up to the yuri standards :)
kadakithis Sep 25, 2015
All your games are pretty awesome Jack, I play a lot of indie games but your writers/artists/ and concepts really take the cake. Even my least favorite games by winterwolves knock the ball out of the park in quality, especially compared to other games out there.



And they are always getting better. Even as it is, I will probably buy both versions of QoT and Undead Lily right off the bat just to get to know all the characters. I'm starting to think this is a conspiracy to get all my spending money, lol.
jack1974 Sep 25, 2015
/nods to conspiracy theory :wink:
pahldus Oct 01, 2015
Honestly it is awesome when people use words that make me have to go look them up, however I don't find that often. Good linguistic skills mixed with a good variety of vernacular is a thing I truly savor in satisfying reading material.
jack1974 Oct 02, 2015
And here's Thalia, the last sister and also my fav character: http://www.winterwolves.net/blog/2015/10/the-queen-of-thieves-thalia-2/

more secondary characters in next posts :)
jack1974 Oct 09, 2015
http://www.winterwolves.net/blog/2015/10/queen-of-thieves-moirgane/

Moirgane character. I'll do a post for each love interest, and then a final one about Arianna, Lysander, etc :)
yayswords Oct 09, 2015
First sentence made me smile, last paragraph didn't. One "love" too many for my tastes.



Not to mention all the spam below it about you spending time on the wrong game...
jack1974 Oct 09, 2015
Tsk, PSCD will rule! :wink:

I've spent a lot of time on QoT this year, indeed it's basically ready apart the robbery missions which I'll do meanwhile writer/artist finish the remaining stuff later this year :)
Thee Forsaken One Oct 09, 2015
First sentence made me smile, last paragraph didn't. One "love" too many for my tastes.


That's a fair point and it annoys me now that I see it. None of these are really edited beyond what I did myself before sending it to jack.