I'll just post some random stuff as the development goes on. Like today I've been reading a lot of second chapter texts and wanted to share with you the following lines:

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in brown the writer's comments

Shouldn't it be "weak to kisses"?

Yes obviously, but it's just a first draft, as you can see by the comments

Epic demons are purple, right?

LOL It should be so much fun, reading the first drat and then watch it take form and refining itself with every correction.

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the beginning of chapter 3 of Loren 2! As you can see, the writer really knows what makes a topselling game!

Darth Vader in a bikini is a scary thought, especially old Anakin from Return of the Jedi...



Now Loren can fight in a bikini all she wants. It's even practical since body armor doesn't stop light sabers and would just slow her down.

Darth Vader in a bikini is a scary thought, especially old Anakin from Return of the Jedi...

See, that's why is a formidable opponent. People run away screaming in horror at the sight

Now Loren can fight in a bikini all she wants. It's even practical since body armor doesn't stop light sabers and would just slow her down.

On this I think we all agree!