A familiar suggestion If you can, coloring the last save with yellow is a nice feature.



Original:

During the game there are several 'Social Boss Fights'. Some are easier, other require more thinking.



Suggestion:

Change 'other' to the plural 'others:

Some are easier, others require more thinking.



Original:

I knew that Luke, Tom, and also Luke's girlfriend, Helen, had only one chance to escape the long reaches of Nanotech.



Suggestion:

You could remove the 'also', and the sentence would flow a little better:

I knew that Luke, Tom, and Luke's girlfriend, Helen, had..



Original:

Tanya Vanic

Everything! Didn't hear me? The bastard set everything in motion!



Suggestion:

Put 'you' before 'hear':

Everything! Didn't you hear me?