My final point of critique on this (promise). I think you're falling into the trap that sequel/prequel writers often do: Overexplaining things in the original that didn't really need an explanation. The "maybe I can fix this/make this more clear" trap that usually ends up adding something totally unnecessary.
To be clear, I think the rest of Cursed Lands is really well written, and I love that we have so much choice throughout the game, everything is about choice (except that ending
). I even went through all the 100 affection "turned" ending variations just to see what changed (except Jasper, no love for Jasper since he flashed my female MC).