Text coding issues:
Galina's path, this text should be in italics and without Galina's nametag (action description, not dialogue):
Christophe's path, his name shouldn't be in the box:
Diana x Christophe romance CG... I'm not sure if it's too late for the artist to correct this, but it looks as if he was editing Diana's mouth at some point and her lips look too small for the mouth. Here's just a small cut-out from the image, to protect the innocent from instant brain-melting
In the same image, her left pinky also looks a bit disjointed (some edits there, too, I believe) but that's less noticeable.
Some typos in Christophe's scenes:
Diana: *sighs* Fine, you're right............ and I would welcome Ragnorak by that point.
Should be Ragnarök or Ragnarok , I believe
In the jealousy scene
Christophe picks up a crowbar laying nearby, and brings it down on the amethyst heard, breaking it in half.
Funnily enough, I often mess up 't's and 'd's when I speak English, so that's actually what you'd hear me say when I try to say 'heart'
In the main plot, there's a scene where Diana goes to check on the water source poisoning (with Mira?) and has to battle Vause...yet the main enemy image on the card play scene is one of Apex Rahn. I'll send you a savefile later, if I can relocate that...
There are also a couple of typos in the sidequest info screens, I'll post those later when I have more time unless someone else beats me to it.
Oh, just FYI, I got a new computer since the last time I played PSCD, so I was able to do a 'clean' install, and at least so far I have had no problems with the email registration, new relationship path launching, etc.