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Postby jack1974 » Thu Sep 17, 2015 4:24 pm

I'll just post some random stuff as the development goes on. Like today I've been reading a lot of second chapter texts and wanted to share with you the following lines:
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in brown the writer's comments :mrgreen:

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Re: dev thread

Postby ValHallen » Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:44 pm

Shouldn't it be "weak to kisses"?

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Re: dev thread

Postby jack1974 » Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:48 pm

Yes obviously, but it's just a first draft, as you can see by the comments :lol:

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Re: dev thread

Postby Franka » Thu Sep 17, 2015 11:20 pm

Epic demons are purple, right?

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Re: dev thread

Postby Ryocchi » Sun Sep 20, 2015 12:52 am

LOL It should be so much fun, reading the first drat and then watch it take form and refining itself with every correction.

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Re: dev thread

Postby jack1974 » Tue Oct 06, 2015 7:39 am

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:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
the beginning of chapter 3 of Loren 2! As you can see, the writer really knows what makes a topselling game! :mrgreen:

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Re: dev thread

Postby P_Tigras » Tue Oct 06, 2015 6:46 pm

Darth Vader in a bikini is a scary thought, especially old Anakin from Return of the Jedi... :o

Now Loren can fight in a bikini all she wants. It's even practical since body armor doesn't stop light sabers and would just slow her down. :wink:

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Re: dev thread

Postby jack1974 » Tue Oct 06, 2015 6:47 pm

P_Tigras wrote:Darth Vader in a bikini is a scary thought, especially old Anakin from Return of the Jedi... :o

See, that's why is a formidable opponent. People run away screaming in horror at the sight :lol:
P_Tigras wrote:Now Loren can fight in a bikini all she wants. It's even practical since body armor doesn't stop light sabers and would just slow her down. :wink:

On this I think we all agree! :mrgreen:


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