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dev thread
Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2015 4:24 pm
by jack1974
I'll just post some random stuff as the development goes on. Like today I've been reading a lot of second chapter texts and wanted to share with you the following lines:
in brown the writer's comments
Re: dev thread
Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:44 pm
by ValHallen
Shouldn't it be "weak to kisses"?
Re: dev thread
Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:48 pm
by jack1974
Yes obviously, but it's just a first draft, as you can see by the comments
Re: dev thread
Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2015 11:20 pm
by Franka
Epic demons are purple, right?
Re: dev thread
Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2015 12:52 am
by Ryocchi
LOL It should be so much fun, reading the first drat and then watch it take form and refining itself with every correction.
Re: dev thread
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2015 7:39 am
by jack1974
Re: dev thread
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2015 6:46 pm
by P_Tigras
Darth Vader in a bikini is a scary thought, especially old Anakin from Return of the Jedi...
Now Loren can fight in a bikini all she wants. It's even practical since body armor doesn't stop light sabers and would just slow her down.
Re: dev thread
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2015 6:47 pm
by jack1974
P_Tigras wrote:Darth Vader in a bikini is a scary thought, especially old Anakin from Return of the Jedi...
See, that's why is a formidable opponent. People run away screaming in horror at the sight
P_Tigras wrote:
Now Loren can fight in a bikini all she wants. It's even practical since body armor doesn't stop light sabers and would just slow her down.
On this I think we all agree!