Art Thread [Queen of Thieves]

yayswords · Post by **yayswords** » Thu Mar 17, 2016 10:36 am

Of course she won't, she hasn't looked at Joanne once.

Post by **jack1974** » Thu Mar 17, 2016 10:56 am

Therjalla is shy !

or better, is weird. She smiles maybe 2-3 times in the whole story!

Post by **jack1974** » Thu Mar 17, 2016 4:29 pm

Lol like always, Thalia's scenes are the best. Her favorite seduction technique didn't work well with Therjalla though...

yayswords · Post by **yayswords** » Thu Mar 17, 2016 4:56 pm

Is that an acceptable phrasing?

Forsaken, I hope you've been reading up on Seppuku.

Post by **jack1974** » Thu Mar 17, 2016 6:26 pm

Well, if there's something, it's missing a "the" before future, that's it. But that means being super nitpicky.

Thee Forsaken One · Post by **Thee Forsaken One** » Thu Mar 17, 2016 7:51 pm

It is perhaps a little run-on but I don't see anything actually wrong in that sentence. Could perhaps have a comma between 'and' and 'in'.

Post by **jack1974** » Thu Mar 17, 2016 8:55 pm

Don't worry, yaysword is just having withdrawal symptom (hope I wrote it correctly!) from the lack of RPGs to play

yayswords · Post by **yayswords** » Fri Mar 18, 2016 2:01 am

Seems you can say "in future". Hmf.

jack1974 wrote:Don't worry, yaysword is just having withdrawal symptom (hope I wrote it correctly!) from the lack of RPGs to play

Critical miss, sir. Having finally made an enjoyable melee party in PoE, I'm more like overdosed.

Post by **jack1974** » Fri Mar 18, 2016 7:06 am

Hah, think I'm waiting to play PoE because I need to finish all the games first! sigh sob

Troyen · Post by **Troyen** » Fri Mar 18, 2016 5:20 pm

yayswords wrote:Seems you can say "in future". Hmf.

You can? Sounds really weird.