Version 1.5.8 testing

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Re: Version 1.5.8 testing

Post by jack1974 » Sun Apr 20, 2014 10:14 am

Yes I think is better as you suggested, or maybe "I was about to go having a drink to the pub with Rumi." But I think your suggestions are better.
As for Lafleur is correct with lowercase since is a single word. Will do a search & replace for the whole script to be sure!

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Re: Version 1.5.8 testing

Post by Grodul » Sun Apr 20, 2014 12:02 pm

Found few more.

After talking few times with Prince Cliff and after finding out his "preferences", I went to talk to him once more. Out of curiosity I decided to try the female protagonist this time around for my first playthrough, so I was quite puzzled when Cliff called Lisa Nelson "Joshua", the male protagonist. Now, unless Cliff had some personal fantasies in his mind, I'd say that something weird is going on in the script.

This next thing is about certain achievement. The achievement "I Am The Best" requires one skill to on the level 199. Right now after my most recent level up my sniper rifle skill is on level 198 and I still have skill points to spend. However, I seems that I can't add more points to the sniper rifle skill, because it would go over the set amount. This achievement doesn't really affect my gameplay, but it seems hardly fair. Is this a design choice or a design mistake? And yes, I could understand if the achievement was meant for skills like charisma or explosives. If there has already been discussion about this topic somewhere earlier, I have not paid attention.

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Re: Version 1.5.8 testing

Post by jack1974 » Sun Apr 20, 2014 12:23 pm

Do you have a savegame for the first bug?
Actually, even for the second? I wanted to limit each skill to 199, and it doesn't go up because it would go OVER 199, but I think in this case I could allow to go over it :)

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Re: Version 1.5.8 testing

Post by jack1974 » Sun Apr 20, 2014 12:39 pm

OK nevermind found the first bug problem. For the second instead a savegame would be good so I can test values close to 199 :) thanks

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Re: Version 1.5.8 testing

Post by Grodul » Sun Apr 20, 2014 1:52 pm

Where exactly are the saves stored? I have searched every folder under the Planet Stronghold, but I still haven't found them. I must have missed something obvious.
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Re: Version 1.5.8 testing

Post by Miakoda » Sun Apr 20, 2014 1:58 pm

Save locations may depend on your OS, but Windows 7 typically has it at C/Users/Owner/AppData/Roaming/RenPy/Planet_Stronghold_1.5

Owner will vary depending on the name you have for your computer.

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Re: Version 1.5.8 testing

Post by jack1974 » Sun Apr 20, 2014 2:26 pm

If you're playing this version, the saves should also be present in "saves" subfolder, inside the game folder (now Ren'Py stores them into two locations, one more practical to find out :lol:).

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Re: Version 1.5.8 testing

Post by Miakoda » Sun Apr 20, 2014 3:12 pm

I hope you don't mind us bringing forth all these small typos.

Here are a few more:

Original:
Android Lucille
Take this ion bomb. If you place it in their lair, the explosion will eliminate most of the Apex Rahn. If you have high Sneak Skill, it is possible to complete this mission without having to fight the alpha Apex Rahn himself.

Suggestion:
Put an 'a' before 'Sneak' to get:
...If you have a high Sneak Skill, it is...


Original:
Android Lucille:
Without their warchief, the Arnox race is in a state of chaos. There are three Arnox Sentinals as possible candidates to replace him. Your goal is to elimiante all three of them.

Suggestion.
The middle sentence isn't a complete sentence. Maybe rearrange it to something to:

There are three Arnox Sentinels who are possible candidates to replace him.

Original:
Joshua Nelson
And this will mantan the chaotic situation in the Arnox territory?

Suggestion:
'mantan' should be 'maintain'

Original:
Joshua Nelson:
Look there! A small group of Arnox Scouts is attacking an unknown type of Apex.

Suggestion:
Change 'is' to 'are'. Multiple Arnox Scouts require the use of 'are' to get:
Look there! A small group of Arnox Scouts are attacking an unknown type of Apex.

Original:
Joshua Nelson
Yes. You could thank us by giving us your that nice weapon of yours.

Suggestion.
Remove the first 'your' to get:
Yes. You could thank us by giving us that nice weapon of yours.

Original:
Apex Rahn
Haha! There's no way he can survive his interrogation tecniques.

Suggestion:
'tecniques' is a misspelling. It should be 'techniques'
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Re: Version 1.5.8 testing

Post by jack1974 » Sun Apr 20, 2014 4:00 pm

Thanks, and no I don't mind at all!

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Re: Version 1.5.8 testing

Post by Miakoda » Sun Apr 20, 2014 5:13 pm

There will be some more typos coming for the next while:
Original:
Phillip Koenig
Hey, hey, slow down! There was something in the Apex Alpha stomach.

Suggestion:
Alpha should have an "'s" after it to indicate possesion to get:
Hey, hey, slow down! There was something in the Apex Alpha's stomach.


Original:
Tom Shatz
Well, the only way to know is to get inside and explore it.

Suggestion:
Change 'get' to 'go' to get:
Well, the only way to know is to go inside and explore it.

Original:
Joshua Nelson:
All right. Let's get inside!

Suggestion:
As above, I suggest making 'get' to 'go'. You can also make this one sentence along the lines of:
Alright, let's go inside!

Original:
Jacob Miles
Using an explosive is out of the question since would make the whole place collapse...there is-

Suggestion:
I'd suggest putting an 'it' before 'would'. That would make the sentence flow a little better:
Using an explosive is out of the question since it would make the whole place collapse...there is-

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