Thread for typos/minor errors/etc.

[SerTabris]

The Loren board had one of these, but I didn't see one here.

(I encountered these playing through 1.52 as Joshua)
Typos:
First entering science lab: "Wow it's huge... but I don't see anyone around?" (should have comma after first word)
Resting: "Now you feel definitely better" (should be "Now you definitely feel better")
First going to landing pad: "It's a magnificent but at same time scary view; what's lurking outside in the wilderness?" (should be "at the same time")
Rebecca: "As you can see, it seems that prince Cliff wasn't kidnapped, but-" (Prince should be capitalized)

Sophia: "And now?Where are they?" (should have space after first '?')

Experience screen: "Hits/shoots" should be "Hits/shots"

Other minor details: In battle: "First Aid Kit Click on a hero to use the item on him, or click close"
Would look better with some kind of separator between item name and description. Also, 'him' may be inappropriate.

[jack1974]

Thanks again, will check the texts for those errors

[SerTabris]

A few more:
The effect message for Spread Shot ends with a comma for a 3-person party.
Joshua: Yes, the surveillance androids [...]. However, We cannot ignore the possibility of future attacks." ('we' should be uncapitalized)
Choice: "If know it's surprising, but he must have had his reasons." (should be 'I know')
Rebecca: "Not always, but I'd say you have around 75% of chance. [...]) (should be 'a 75% chance')
Android Lucille (building from scraps): "Sure! Take a look at those blueprint and choose what you want me to build." (should be 'blueprints')
Joshua: "Hmm sounds dangerous, but I have no choice, right?" (I think that this would generally be depicted 'Hmm...')
Joshua: "Good, I didn't want to destroy you, Lucille." (should be 'don't')
Hospital description: "Here androids and scientists heal injured people and research the alien lifeforms" (should end with a period; I think "research alien lifeforms" would be more proper also)

[Lonestar51]

A type on the website...

I was just looking at the features of the bonus content here and I saw that Lucille would "asseble weapons". I am sure some m has gone missing...

[jack1974]

Definitely! thanks fixed it.

[nightshadengale]

Couple issues with Tom's quest assignment dialogue:

"it's in the Dredans area" --> Dredans should be Dredans' for this...but I think it would sound much more natural if he said "It's in Dredan territory" instead.

"There are still some groups of Dredans hanging around dong as they please."

[jack1974]

Thanks, will check them!

[Jaeger]

It should be:

No, the location is quite, clear I've marked the location on your map, but there's something strange.

[jack1974]

Ops, thanks will correct it!