I am not too far into the game
and did not know they were written by different authors. but now that I think about it, most of the issues I noticed were in the random encounters with the boys so I suspect that is right. I still love your company and your games. This one reminds me a lot of Princess Maker (which i love). It would just be cool to have someone double check the text before release :D
ETA: I did see one thing that bothered me a lot with the girls', when you first meet Hade. But I suspect that is intentional. It is a big huge chunk of text and has contradictions from a few words, to a few sentences later in the same paragraph. But given the characters' reactions, I think this was probably intentional, still made my head hurt and made me go "what the heck" at first lol. for example she starts by saying "There were five, not four; two were male, two were female" I read that sentence like 3 times wondering so what the heck was the fifth one then? lol.